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Due to size constraints, I'm dividing this into chapters. Here's chapter 3!
Finally, part two of Beatrix's tale is here. Took a while but it'd done at last. Now, I have one more minor literary commitment, a private venture, before Helix begins.
Hope you all enjoy! Click Download if you have any trouble reading it.
Beatrix (c)
Girl with many arms (c) Lynn Okamoto
Blood, Bio, other Helixers and characters (c)
Finally, part two of Beatrix's tale is here. Took a while but it'd done at last. Now, I have one more minor literary commitment, a private venture, before Helix begins.
Hope you all enjoy! Click Download if you have any trouble reading it.
Beatrix (c)
Girl with many arms (c) Lynn Okamoto
Blood, Bio, other Helixers and characters (c)
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All and all I have to say that this was quite an intresting story to read, the parts with Bio and her outfit did make me smile a bit(diaper rash!
) and I liked the whole "non black and white more of a gray color" Helix organization ideals(not THE most original concept but it hasn't been done the death yet and I personally like it in general so kudos for using it) I'd guess and say Magneto was an influence of sorts when thinking up the idea? Bio acted more or less as I thought she could, which is good.
All and all I give this
Half a star Cause no one is perfect, they can be very, very talented(like you) at what they do but no one is perfect. And it's really just vain to say other wise, but that's me.
) and I liked the whole "non black and white more of a gray color" Helix organization ideals(not THE most original concept but it hasn't been done the death yet and I personally like it in general so kudos for using it) I'd guess and say Magneto was an influence of sorts when thinking up the idea? Bio acted more or less as I thought she could, which is good.All and all I give this
Half a star Cause no one is perfect, they can be very, very talented(like you) at what they do but no one is perfect. And it's really just vain to say other wise, but that's me.